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Trials of Life: Storybook's End

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I've finally found it, where all of this started. It took months to track one of them down, but I finally managed to find an Outsider from her world. The old stallion claimed to be from a world of sand and stone, and I believe him. He didn't look like he was Saddle Arabian, but the way he spoke had a Saddle Arabian canter to it. And the certainty that he had... I'm convinced. It took more effort than I thought, and it may even count as our first adventure!
So now I know where the story began, the question is what happened next? I've heard stories of what happened next but things change each time I hear it. There's one constant though, the one thing I care about: She was there. I'll write more when I actually find the truth. ~Cry.

"The Lessons End, and Trials begin. Where one will fall, three will rise. The mien of stars has been lost to mane of white. Wing of horn, misguided mare. Hooffall, tail-swish, sunrise. Were gods to tread, legends begin."


"What do you make of that riddle?" A gray maned stallion sat at a table, his student struggling to focus on the task at hoof and his riddles. She was an odd sort, and one of the best kept secrets in Canterlot at the moment. He himself was the lead professor of innate magical arts, spellcraft, and esoteric lore at Princess Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns, the merit that had lead the Princess to allow him into the fold. "And don't let a single drop spill."

Lila stood in the middle of what had become her classroom over the past six months, her eyes closed and face scrunched up in concentration. The spiral horn sprouting from her forehead glowed with a crackling ice blue light, mirroring the much softer light around a full glass of water that floated three feet in front of her face. She nearly dropped it when Practical Joke addressed her, but did manage to recover quickly enough to not spill it. The glass steadied and spun smoothly as requested, taking all her focus to both levitate and spin it at the same time. She chanced a glance, one eye opened to reveal her success. She smiled, the wings at her sides almost fluttering in her moment of pride. It was then replaced by surprise, as Practical Joke's stoic face appeared right next to her own. The glass tumbled through the air, thrown in her shock. A bright green veil of magic replaced her blue to gather even the water that had been spilt. Practical Joke did not look back as the water was funneled back into the glass, his stony gaze focused entirely on Lila. It was then that she realized he had actually spoken, as focused as she had been. "Oh... Can you repeat the question?" Her hope that he wouldn't be upset was groundless, even in her eyes.

"I had asked what you made of the riddle, but you were clearly too focused to notice. Perhaps now you can answer, though the test's purpose is lost." She shrunk, having heard none of what he had said in the past ten minutes. Not that most would blame her, as Practical Joke's voice droned in that special way only teachers can have, putting to sleep all who heard it for too long. It was then he sighed, a rare break in his stoic personality. "If the Princess herself had not vouched for you, I would say you are the most untalented magic user I had ever met. I trust her in that you have the great potential your wings and horn imply, but I had expected a princess from across the eastern sea to have at least a rudimentary grasp on spellcraft. Finally you make progress though, after nearly four months under my tutelage. So I will give you a break, what do you make of this riddle?" She sat down in front of him as he spoke, relieved that she wouldn't be told off again. "The Lessons End, and Trials begin. Where one will fall, three will rise. The mien of stars has been lost to mane of white. Wing of horn, misguided mare. Hooffall, tail-swish, sunrise. Were gods to tread, legends begin. Now lift the glass, and tell me what you think." This time she paid attention as the glass rose to float in place, the short poem rolled around in her head for nearly a minute before she spoke.

"It's... Wing of horn, misguided mare refers to me, right?" She touched the horn on her head with a hoof, her wings unfurled as well. "Is it a prophecy? I've heard a few of those before, but this one's hard to follow." She tilted her head curiously, her thoughts intently focused on her attempt to pull anything meaningful from the jumble of words. "It almost sounds like the beginning of one of the Archive's history books." She looked up at Practical Joke, being just a bit shorter than him when she stood.

"Yes, it does. It may be a prophecy, but it has done it's job." He stepped aside to reveal the floating glass of water, spun smoothly in her crackling magical grip. It then fell immediately as her subconscious concentration broke, once more caught by his own grasp. "Now you know the first trait of active arcane gravitational manipulation, or telekinesis as you would hear from today's unicorns. Wrong of course, as our innate gravitational manipulation relies on magic to express our will on the world instead of the purely mental influence of telekinesis. Unfortunately such distinctions are lost on the populace of Equestria at large." Lila listened to his small lecture, though still a bit surprised at how easy it had been for her to keep the glass in the air when she had struggled to even lift a pencil a few short weeks ago. "In short, arcane manipulation is subconscious. While conscious command of the cantrip is possible and can increase an individual's strength many times over, it is much more difficult than simply lifting the glass and allowing yourself to keep hold of it."

"So I just need to not think about it? It's like picking something up. That... makes a lot of sense, now that I think about it." As much as Practical Joke's lessons bored, and sometimes frustrated, her she admitted once again that he knew what he was doing when it came to teaching.

"In less descriptive words, yes. Now, take the glass and walk one circuit of the room while yo-" He stopped, eyes going wide for a moment before he bent his knees to bow deeply. Lila turned in the process of levitating the glass once more to find Princess Celestia herself waiting between the ornate wooden doors to her classroom. Lila mimicked Practical Joke's motion, sinking to the polished marble floor. "Princess Celestia, I am sorry I hadn't noticed you sooner."

"That is quite alright Professor, I wanted to see myself how Lila was coming along in her studies." The radiant alicorn stepped further into the room, her presence alone suffused it with a calm grace. Her evening sun painted the near empty castle room a dusky crimson from the open windows, but it paled in comparison to the mare before them with a warm smile. “I see she is doing well. Thank you for your time Professor, if you are done for the day you may go.” Practical Joke rose from his bow and started to pack his things.

“Thank you Princess. She is coming along nicely, I believe she has a strong enough grasp of the basics now.” His saddlebags were quickly packed and placed on his back, and with one more bow as he passed he was gone. Lila was now alone with the Princess, and had yet to move a muscle.

“You may relax Lila.” The Princess of the sun lifted the smaller alicorn from her bow. “I have something that I must request of you, if you think you are ready.” Lila looked up at the Princess, her confusion turned to curiosity.

“What is it Princess?”

“There have been reports of an unknown entity spreading through the Everfree Forest. It is not clear what the entity is, but I believe that it is much more dangerous than may be expected, and may prove to threaten Ponyville soon. That is why I want to send you. You have shown experience in handling dealings above that of normal ponies, and you will not be alone.” The Princess’ horn glowed, three orbs of pure sunlight grew into existence before they popped, a map, a pair of saddlebags, and the saddle she had arrived wearing were deposited before Lila. “I realize this is sudden of me to ask, but you are the only one I trust to handle such a task. My Faithful Student would jump at the chance, but I am not certain that she would be safe from what lurks within the forest.”

Lila stared at the saddlebags and map for a time as her mind tripped over itself. Finally she looked up at the Princess, caution born of various misadventures since she had come here breaking through the urge to accept immediately. “But I can barely use lift a cup of water, and my wings…” She looks at the feathered appendages, stretching one out to touch with a hoof. “I can barely fly too. So why do you want me to go now, I… I don’t think I’m ready.” Her head lowered, spirits sinking.

“You are certainly having no trouble now.” A hoof pointed to just behind Lila, whose turn revealed the glass of water four feet off the ground. A glance up revealed that her horn’s glow had lost the static crackle, now glowing with a gentle blue-white magic.”Lila, I would not give you a task that I did not believe you could accomplish. As difficult as I know it will be, you will learn many valuable lessons out there in Equestria. You could stay here, learning all there is to know of magic and flight, but you would not grow from it. There’s something more to magic than spells and horns, and I know you will find it.” Her hoof lifted Lila’s head to face her. “I have faith in you Lila.”

The smaller Alicorn’s thoughts turned chaotic, but after a few seconds she shoved them away. Princess Celestia had faith in her, and if she had learned one thing from her six months in this world it was the Princess Celestia knew what she was doing. “I… okay. I’ll go.” She started to nose the saddlebags on her back, stopping after a few seconds to set the glass of water down. A flash of golden light placed the saddle snugly around her barrel as her magic wrapped around the bags, her tongue out in concentration on not concentrating. It smoothly floated onto her back, weight returned once her telekinesis faded. They were already packed. “You said I wouldn’t be alone… what did you mean?”

Princess Celestia’s took a step aside and gestured behind herself. A stallion stepped out from the hallway, hoofsteps uneven as if he had a slight limp. His short cropped silver-blue mane was slicked back, leaving the base of his horn bare. A gray coat matched the mane, holding traces of a once noble navy blue. Both mane and coat contrasted tired dark magenta eyes that held a wisdom clearly hard bought. The simple burlap saddlebags on his back lacked the usual cutie-mark buckle, a simple iron piece instead of the saxophone silhouette letting flow a trio of shimmering silver notes visible on his flank. Unlike most ponies, his years hadn’t been kind to him and left him to look gruff and world weary.

“This is Soulful Blues, he will be your new magic instructor and guide through Equestria. Soulful Blues, this is Lila.” The Princess gestured him into the room with a quick nod of her head. A magenta glow lifted the rolled up map from the marble and tucked it into his bag. All the while his tired eyes were locked with Lila’s, never leaving her for an instant.

“Thank you kindly Princess.” His voice was deep and gravelly, though she heard remnants of a confident charm long scoured away. “So you’re the mystery mare. An alicorn? Well, what are you waiting for?” He turns, half limping from the room. Lila watched him leave in shock, looking back to Celestia.

“He is abrasive, but adept at what he does, and skilled in an art few dare to pursue.” There was a trace of humor in her voice, and she watched him leave with a… different smile than before. Lila was still inexperienced at reading equine faces, but she there was something there that reminded her of Aladdin’s smirk, oddly enough. “He will not lead you wrong.” Her warm smile returned. “Though you will be left behind if you do not follow soon.” Lila realized he was already gone, and galloped off after him. She found him standing just outside the open gates of the castle, looking out over Canterlot. Her gallop slowed into a trot, dropped into a walk, and finally stopped just at the threshold. Two armored guards, one solar and one lunar, stood on either side of the door dutifully ignoring her in their vigil. Soulful Blues looked back at her, a peaceful smile fading into his earlier scowl. The setting sun cast half his face in shadow, the other half in a silvery red. In that moment he seemed a stallion half his age, an illusion broken by his rough voice.

“Are you coming? We’ve got a lot of ground to cover.” Lila blinked, looking down. An anxiety filled her, the memory of how she started her first adventure flashed through her mind. But… she wasn’t that girl anymore. Her hooffall resounded against the marble, the first step away from safety and into the world.


So ends the first act, where storybook fantasies give way to true legend.


Though every legend must start somewhere. The odd duo had barely left the castle gates before they left the warm sunset for the darkness of an alleyway. Light spilling from the windows of ponies already preparing for night's fall lit the way alongside brief snatches of the setting sunlight. Silence reigned through the abandoned back streets as they threaded their way through the less brilliant side of Canterlot, broken only by hoofsteps and the occasional pet's brief appearance. With little else to do, Lila took to studying her new companion. His limp, she noted, was in his left hind leg. He himself seemed content to look everywhere but back towards her, leading the way with a practiced ease she recognized from her own wanderings in Agrabah. Finally she broke the silence, as they passed by the back exit of a restaurant.

"So... do you live here?" She trotted a bit faster to catch up, stepping around a trashcan that had been tipped over. Soulful Blues turned toward her, eyes level with her own. There was... something off in them, but Lila couldn't quite put her hoof on what exactly.

"No." His bluntness surprised her enough that it took her a few seconds before she realized he had turned back toward the alley.

"And?" She twirled a hoof, motioning for him to continue. When he didn't she huffed, looking away. "If you're going to teach me, you need to at least talk to me. I'm just trying to be friendly here."

"I don't live in Canterlot. Nothing more to say."

"Then where do you live?" Now she was getting annoyed.

"Neigh Orleans, when I care to."

"What's it like there?"

"Warm. Quiet when it wants to be, loud when it doesn't."

"What do you do there?"

"Nothing."

"Oh come on, you already told me where you live. You can at least tell me what you do for a living."

"I did."

"... You don't talk much."

"You do." That was the last straw in Lila's patience, and with a rather annoyed scream of frustration she fell back to follow him again. She could have sworn she saw a hint of a smirk on his muzzle in the light of an open window, but when it closed the trace was gone. She continued to focus on half glaring at him, so unfortunately she didn't notice the doorstep until her forehoof caught on it. She pitched forward, her wings flashed open in a blind bid to catch herself. She landed on something oddly furry and solid, only to realize a moment later that a teal pegasus mare had dove out of the house whose step she had tripped over to catch her. The mare was standing oddly to not fall herself, her own wings spread for balance. Lila could feel one of them pressed against the underside of her saddle before she caught herself, rising quickly to her own hooves. She could feel an faint electric tingle in her coat, the barest trace of magenta glow the only sign that Soulful Blues had noticed. She took a step back, gaze turned down toward the bronze maned mare... who immediately dropped into a deep bow against the cold pavement, eyes cast to Lila's hooves.

"I'm so sorry Princess, are you okay?" Lila blinked... then blinked again. Stunned as she was, all she could do was gape like a fish for a few seconds.

"Y-Yes." She finally managed to collect herself enough to process the robe the mare wore. She must have been getting ready for bed when she had seen Lila about to fall. That thought snapped her out of her confusion, and she blinked again before focusing on the mare. "Thank you for catching me." The mare flinched, and looked up for the first time. She stared up at Lila in awe, her rusty eyes wide.

"N-No trouble at all Princess. You're not hurt, are you?" The mare met Lila's stare, seemingly unable to look away. Wonder was clear in her voice, sounding like a foal who had just seen their first Hearth's Warming Play.

"I'm okay, thanks to you. Um... You can get up now." The mare bolted upright, wings locked to her sides. Her head was still lowered, and she hadn't stopped staring yet. Discomfort growing, Lila took a step forward. "Thanks again? Sorry to have interrupted your night." Not really sure what else to say, she walked past the mare, who slipped out of the way in what could only be described as reverence. "Good night?" At that the pegasus jolted, nodding and bowing again.

"Good night Princess..." She trailed off, but didn't go back inside as Lila continued down the alleyway, continuing to stare after the alicorn. She was still locked in the surreal feeling of the moment when Soulful Blues stepped out from behind a corner to rejoin her.

"Quite a show there." Lila responded with a questioning look, folding her wings back against her sides.

"What do you mean? Why was she calling me Princess? I'm not a princess, I can barely lift a cup, much less the sun or moon."

"True, but you looked like one to her. Not many ponies like you around, all of them except you princesses. The display you put on didn't help." Soulful Blues turned a corner, face unreadable. Lila stopped dead in her tracks, a mental image of how she must have looked to the pegasus mare flashed into her mind. Wings outstretched against the fading light of the setting sun, looking down on her with cool blue eyes almost regal. That triggered another image, a memory this time. Princess Celestia standing before Lila as she arose for the first time in Equestria, the setting sun painting the sky behind her, the princess' wings spread out to shade the smaller alicorn. The sheer awe of the moment was enough to affect her even now, and she shivered in the cool chill of the alleyway. Her wings pressed tighter to her sides and she blushed heavily, embarrassed more than a little. Then it hit her. She had affected that mare almost as much just by her appearance alone. The thought sent her mind reeling, enough that she didn't notice that Soulful Blues had left with instructions to stay put. Minutes passed as she sat perched atop a doorstep. She had shrugged off her saddlebags and stared through her hooves, lost in thought. After a short time she felt a heavy weight fall over her, a hood blocking her vision. She jumped to her hooves only to see Soulful Blues standing in front of her, magic around his horn. She looked down to discover that he had thrown a heavy grey cloak over her and was fastening the metal leaf that acted as a clasp.

"What's this?"

"A cloak." She repressed a sigh at his insistence on playing this game.

"Why?"

"Same reason we didn't trot down the Solar Line. To lay low. We're here for a job, not worship. Keep your wings under it, hood down. You'll stand out with it up." She bristled at that, about to protest. The memory of the pegasus mare's face cut her off, her awestruck face burned into her mind's eye.

"...Good point." She sighed, her saddlebags wrapped in her icy blue magic and deposited on her back. Soulful Blues had already started off, forcing her into a gallop to catch up. They exited the alleyway together, emerging just as the sun finally finished setting. Directly in front of them stood the train station, the view past the platform spread for miles of Equestrian countryside. Not quite as grand as her room in one of Canterlot's towers, but breathtaking all the same in the brief twilight calm. There was still a number of ponies going about their business, those she passed gave her a curious look but rarely a second as most dismissed her quickly enough. One young foal waved from his mother's side, which she returned with a soft smile. She realized that she had stopped to stare again, and looked around for Soulful Blues' distinctive colors. A flash of silver near the ticket booth caught her eye, and she trotted over to it. The green mare behind the glass was busy talking to Soulful Blues, so Lila glanced over the nearby signs in search of something of interest.

Written language wasn't her strong suit and so for a moment the symbols on the signs were nearly incomprehensible. It took her a few moments to translate from Equestrian to Arabian, but thanks to Princess Celestia's lessons it wasn't too difficult. The Princess had mentioned a place called Ponyville, which she discovered after a short time. It would be an hour's train ride, but there was one embarking in the next few minutes. The sign said a ticket would cost five... something. It took her a second to recognize the symbol for Bits. She twisted, digging sheepishly in her bags and berating herself for forgetting something so basic. She pushed aside a canteen and some crackers, finding a tied cloth bag atop a metal glint. Loosening the drawstring had revealed it to contain a number of the golden coins, and she was about to investigate the metallic glint before Soulful Blues' voice broke her focus.

"Let's go, our train's waiting." He held a ticket out toward her in a magenta glow. Lila removed her muzzle from her saddlebag, taking the ticket in her own magic and following him. The train was an odd looking vehicle to be sure as it was designed to look like a series of gingerbread houses and pastries more than a train. Lila's stomach grumbled as she followed Soulful Blues to their car, and she fetched one of the packages of crackers as he settled in on the opposite seat. As the moon rose above Canterlot they began the long, boring journey to Ponyville in relative silence. Not quite how you expect an adventure to start, but as Lila stared out the window she felt a familiar excitement start to build. Alongside it was the nostalgic realization that this was her first adventure in her new home, the first time she could explore Equestria. She couldn't stop the excited tail-swish or grin spread across her face as she realized that the world was open to her now. She was free. She was on an adventure. And she felt alive.

Here we leave act two, leaving behind comfort of home and hearth to venture to the unknown.


Lila was awoken by the train's steady sway coming to a stop, replaced by Soulful Blues' hoof on her shoulder. She yawned, dragged to the edge of awareness by the stallion's voice.

"We're here." He stepped away and walked out of sight as her eyes slid closed. She was just slipping back into the wonderful dream she had been having when the train car's door rattled shut. She started and accidentally shoved herself off her seat with a wing, landing in a heap on the hard floor.

"I'm awake, I'm awake! Huh? Blues?" The stallion was gone she noted as she untangled herself from her cloak, picking herself up off the floor and grabbing her bags. She rushed out of the car after checking to make sure she had everything. Her first hoofstep on the wooden platform was met with a blast of warm air tinged with the smell of fruit and earth. Soulful Blues waited for her at the end of the almost empty station, speaking to a lilac coated stallion. She stopped to just breath in the sharply clean air and take in the scenery. It was unlike anything she could remember seeing, as used to the desert as she was. Her older memories, those misty recollections of her home before Agrabah and of the garden she would never be able to forget, came to the fore. She already liked this town, even as she rejoined Soulful Blues with a sleepy yawn. The lilac stallion had left by then, and Soulful Blues turned to her.

"Let's ask arou-" He was cut off by a rather loud explosion, a blast of cake batter and confetti knocking him to the ground. He had taken the brunt of the blast, leaving Lila with little more than some confetti stuck in her mane. A pink mare with a fluffy mane like cotton candy revealed herself, wheeling a large light blue cannon still dripping batter out from behind a streetlamp, shouted "WELCOME!" and vanished just as quickly. Lila stood shocked stock still as Soulful Blues pulled himself to his hooves. She then started laughing at his dour expression, and fell to the platform unable to stop. He looked thoroughly unamused, deadpan stare unshaken as he tried scraping battered confetti out of his coat. Lila was finding it hard to breath, and after a moment even his scowl twitched into the hint of a grin. With most of the batter discarded and the moon high in the sky, Soulful Blues managed to coax the near comatose mare into following him. She continued to snicker every time she caught sight of a glob he had missed, but after a time started to look toward the other ponies still active this late. Most gave the pair a smile and a nod or ignored them, seeming to accept their presence with nary a second thought.
The quiet acceptance was... comforting in contrast to Canterlot's indifference, and she silently thanked Soulful Blues for the cloak.

Said stallion lead the way quickly to what appeared to be an inn, a wooden sign hanging above it's door. It read "The Crystal Bell," and was in the shape of it's namesake. A tinny jingle heralded their entrance, and Lila's jaw dropped.

Standing behind the counter was a creature she had never seen before. He looked like an earth pony stallion, his coat nearly the same color as her's with a mane of untidy blue. What placed him outside the realms of possibility was the vast array of angular crystals sprouting from his body, a jagged field of sparkling gems covered his back and grew from his neck like a necklace. One of his brilliant blue eyes had been covered by the stones, and when he raised a hoof in greeting he revealed that they circled his wrist in a jagged band. They made a soft scraping sound as they rubbed against one another, but he didn't appear hurt by them despite moving almost awkwardly. What appeared to be a walking staff made of crystal leaned against the welcome counter, a trio of jagged crystals pulsing with a faint glow almost like a heartbeat. Despite how bizarre he was compared to the ponies she had met before, his welcoming smile didn't fall at her surprise. In fact, it grew a bit as he waved the two in.

"Welcome to the Crystal bell, how are you tonight? Would you like a room?" The crystallized stallion turned around a book on the table, a small quill and pen next to it. "It is five bits per room. Breakfast is served in the morning at your leisure, and room service is provided at all hours of the night." If he was bothered by Lila's continued staring he didn't show it, his tone a steady calm that fit his soft voice.

"Two rooms, we won't need room service." Soulful Blues slid fifteen bits onto the counter. The stallion's calm smile twitched, but returned quickly as he reached a hoof to the crystals on his back. A pair of sharp cracks were heard, and two keys made of the same crystal were passed across the counter alongside the extra five bits.

"Here are your keys, your rooms are second and third on the right upstairs. The bathroom is at the end of the hall. Please have a wonderful night, and you may keep the change Soulful Blues." The stallion was already filling out the sign-in book when he stopped, looking up to Lila. "I apologize, I don't know your name. Please, allow me to introduce myself; My name is Cryst, it is a pleasure to meet you. This is Jingle." He bowed his head slightly to her, a hoof gesturing off to the side. She blinked, finally closing her mouth. She had to admit he was surprisingly charming, despite being so bizarre.

"I'm L-Lila, nice to meet you." She was really starting to get tired of getting shaken by things, she had just left Canterlot today after all. She glanced toward where his hoof pointed to find an earth pony mare with a warm yellow coat and equally sunny red mane off in the corner reading a magazine. The mare waved for a moment before going back to her reading. The stallion filled her name into the book, then closed it. Soulful Blues had already gone upstairs, and she followed while giving Cryst another glance. He smiled politely up at her as she ascended the stairs.

The moment she got to the second floor her key was passed to her in a soft magenta glow. Soulful Blues was waiting, half turned toward her.

"We'll start looking in the morning. For now, get some rest." He didn't give her a second glance as he turned down the hall.

"But what about my lessons? Aren't you going to teach me magic?" Lila attempted to follow him, nearly running into the old stallion when he stopped. He glanced back, impatience clear as clear on his face as the batter that had hardened in his coat.

"In the morning. Now go to bed, you won't learn anything tired." The old stallion turned and limped down the hall, the bathroom door slammed shut behind him. It was with a weary sigh that she opened her own door, the weight of the day having hit her all at once. She undid her cloak, her bags and saddle thrown to the ground on top of it. After flopping on the admittedly comfortable bed, she stared out toward Princess Luna's moon. It didn't last long, and soon she had pulled the covers back and tucked herself into bed. In a last act before the desire to sleep fully overwhelmed her, she pulled open her bags and let them spill out. She finally addressed the last thing that had caught her attention in her bags, now that she could rest. A small metal pendant was lifted by her magic, the dark room painted in the ice blue glow around it. She pulled it closer, blinking after a moment. It was a small gold disk depicting an Alicorn rearing up before a golden sunrise, the sun's outline marking the outline of the necklace. It took a moment, but she did smile. It was with this smile still on her face that she set the pendant on the nearby nightstand, closed her eyes, and drifted off to a dreamless sleep.

So the curtain closes upon act three. The players all in place, the tale begun, and fantasy turned to reality.

This is a commission for ASinglePetal. This is chapter two of about six planned. If you'd like to ask questions, or comment, etc. feel free to do so down below.

ASinglePetal owns Lila, Cryst, and all of her associated intellectual property. She holds sole rights to further distribute this work, or allow others to do so. Hasbro owns MLP and all associated intellectual property. I own Soulful Blues, and unless I'm being sued none of you care. But seriously, all intellectual property that is borrowed in the production of this piece is owned by their associated legal holders. If you've taken an interest in this story, but haven't seen the show, go check it out if you've got the time.

Anyway, now that the legal stuff is done: Chapter 3 will be shorter than this, as the gimmick used for this won't be repeated as I'm not that insane. Enjoy the Chaos!
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zitagirl96's avatar
We may had to wait a lot, but this doesn't matter anymore.

I liked it. It wasn't like I expected to be, but I wasn't disappointed.

Soulful Blues is an intetesting character. At first I didn't like it but he became likable in the end.

Was that little scene with the lamp Genie?

And we met Cryst.

So.anyway, it was good and look forward to read the next chapter.